cc: wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu
date: Fri, 24 Jun 2005 19:32:56 +0200
from: Stefan Rahmstorf <rahmstorf@ozean-klima.de>
subject: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] SEction 6.2.3
to: Eystein Jansen <Eystein.Jansen@geo.uib.no>

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Hi friends,

attached is section 6.2.3. for the FOD, including the EndNote file 
(which holds all my Chapter 6 references).

The changes from the ZOD are not dramatic. What I have done:
- No length cuts, as this was already right.
- Cut the number of refs as requested (including all self-refs) and in 
fact a bit more - as this is a fairly general section on paleo-modeling 
methods, I thought I can cut a bit more refs than average, as general 
statements (like that models are used to simulate e.g. the LGM) do not 
need to be backed up with refs, since we discuss specific examples later 
on anyway.
- Implemented reviewer requests for some small rephrasing, including new 
sentence on vege and ecosystem models
- Implemented one reviewer request for changing a ref, resisted some 
reviewer requests for additional refs (e.g., citing Milankovich...)

The exec bullet point for this section (methodological advances) is fine 
with me.

Hope it is to everyones liking,
Stefan

p.s. Now I'm working on section 6.3.2 on abrupt climate changes. Won't 
finish today, but over weekend.

 -- 
To reach me directly please use: rahmstorf@ozean-klima.de
(My former addresses @pik-potsdam.de are read by my assistant Brigitta.)

Stefan Rahmstorf
www.ozean-klima.de
www.realclimate.org


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