cc: Gavin Schmidt <gschmidt@giss.nasa.gov>, t.osborn@uea.ac.uk
date: Tue Aug 19 10:30:15 2008
from: Phil Jones <p.jones@uea.ac.uk>
subject: Re: Revised version the Wengen paper
to: mann@psu.edu

    Mike, Gavin,
         On the final Appendix plot, the first and last 12 years of the annual CET record
    were omitted from the smoothed plot.  Tim's away, but when he did this with
    them in the light blue line goes off the plot at the end. The purpose of the piece
    was to show that the red/black lines were essentially the same. It wasn't
    to show the current light blue smoothed line was above the red/blue lines,
    as they are crap anyway.
         The y-axis scale of the plot is constrained by what was in the IPCC
    diagram from the first report. What we'll try is adding it fully back in or
    dashing the first/last 12 years. The 50-year smoother includes quite
    a bit of padding - we're using your technique Mike. The issue is that CET
    has been so warm the last 20 years or so.
        Normal people in the UK think the weather is cold and the summer is
    lousy, but the CET is on course for another very warm year. Warmth
    in winter/spring doesn't seem to count in most people's minds
    when it comes to warming.
      Will mod the borehole section now. Because this had been written
    by Juerg initially, I added in a paraphrased section from AR4. I will
    mod this accordingly. Hope you noticed Peck's stuff.
    Cheers
    Phil
   At 17:28 18/08/2008, Michael Mann wrote:

     Hi Phil,
     traveling, and only had brief opportunity to look this over. only 2 substantial
     comments:
     1. I don't know who wrote the first paragraph of section 3.3 (bottom of page 52/page
     53), but the lack of acknowledgement here in this key summary that we actually
     introduced the idea of 'pseudoproxies' into the climate literature is very troubling.
     the end of the first sentence:
     e.g., Zorita and Gonzlez-Rouco, 2002, Kttel et al., 2007),
     should be changed to:
     e.g., Mann and Rutherford, 2002; Zorita and Gonzlez-Rouco, 2002, Rutherford et al,
     2003; Kttel et al., 2007),
     2. I'm also a bit confused and very concerned about the description of smoothing in
     Appendix A Figure 1.  It sounds like the last 12 years were removed from the end of the
     series? If so, that's not a fair comparison because its really the past decade that
     takes us into 'unprecedented' territory. I would suggest one of two alternative
     approaches:
     a. show the full smoothed curve without removing end data (I don't see any objective
     justification for doing that) or
     b. show the raw annual data through 2006 so readers can see how the most recent values
     compare w/ the MWP peak.
     By the way, I have a revised version of Mann [2004] now in press in GRL, I've attached.
     Please don't distribute or cite prior to publication (which should be one or two weeks
     from now).
     thanks,
     mike
     Phil Jones wrote:

     Dear All,
          Here's the revised version of the paper, together with the responses to the
     reviewers.
      We have told John Matthews, that we will get this back to him by the beginning
      of next week. To us in the UK this means Aug 26/27 as next Monday is a national
      holiday. So, to those not away at the moment, can you look through your
      parts and get any comments back to us by the end of this week or over the
      weekend?
         Can you also look at the references - those in yellow and let me know of
      any that have come out, or are able to correct those that I think just look
      wrong?
         I hope you'll think of this as an improvement.
      Cheers
      Phil
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