date: Thu, 5 Jun 2008 20:56:12 -0400
from: "Wahl, Eugene R" <wahle@alfred.edu>
subject: RE: Review Comments on the Wengen paper
to: "Phil Jones" <p.jones@uea.ac.uk>

Hi Phil:
 
Good news!  Thanks again for your leadership on this.
 
Please note that I am in the process of relocation from New York and establishing residence in Colorado now through the rest of June, and will be travelling some also in July.  Thus, my availability will be limited now until the beginning of August when I start at NOAA-Paleo.  However, I won't be dropping off the face of the planet and will be checking mail when possible.  Please let me know if you have thoughts of things I will need to attend to, and I will do all I can to meet those responsibilities as soon as I can.  I don't see any directions that way below, which is why I want to check.
 
Peace, Gene 
Dr. Eugene R. Wahl
Asst. Professor of Environmental Studies
Alfred University
 
607-587-8779 (home, ending 6/12/08)
607-664-7031 (cell, continuing through and after 6/12/08)
22 Reynolds St. 
Alfred, NY 14802 
 
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From: Phil Jones [mailto:p.jones@uea.ac.uk]
Sent: Thu 6/5/2008 8:18 AM
To: Christoph Kull; bo@gfy.ku.dk; thompson.4@osu.edu; EWWO@bas.ac.uk; jan.esper@wsl.ch; Janice Lough; Juerg Luterbacher; Keith Briffa; Tim Osborn; Ricardo Villalba; Kim Cobb; Heinz Wanner; Jonathan Overpeck; Michael Schulz; Eystein Jansen; Nick Graham; Francis Zwiers; Caspar Ammann; Michael E. Mann; Gavin Schmidt; Sandy Tudhope; Tas van Ommen; Wahl, Eugene R; Brendan Buckley; Hugues Goosse
Cc: larry.williams@targetedgrowth.com; Thorsten Kiefer; Naresh Kumar
Subject: Review Comments on the Wengen paper



	 Dear All (especially Peck!),

        Attached are three sets of reviews of the paper - 2 in the pdf file and one in the small doc file.
 As you'll be able to see, there isn't that much to do and the reviews have been
 good. All three reviewers seem to be in awe of the group! I've had a brief
 discussion with Keith as to who should do what. You're all welcome to help
 but I only think most of you will need go through the revised version when we get that
 out - hopefully asap. John Matthews is still hopeful of a 2008 publication date,
 and you'll see we won't be going out for any further reviews - just John checking.

      Many of the comments relate to the tree-ring section and Keith will
 deal with these. They involve some re-organization and some additional refs
 on dendro isotope work. 

    The coral and isotope sections get praised for organization - so well done!
 I'll need some help with the one coral comment on 'vital effects', so can
 Janice, Kim and Sandy work on that. I think it only needs a few sentences
 and maybe extra refs. I know some of you are in Trieste next week, so maybe
 you can work on it there.

    I'll work on the documentary section a bit and liaise with Juerg. This shouldn't involve
 much extra work.

    I'll also look at the borehole section together with what was in Ch 6 of AR4.

    The major bit of new text we need is on the high-res varves and laminated lake records,
 so this is why I highlighted  Peck. They aren't used in large-area high-freq climate
 reconstructions, so emphasis there and to a few key review papers. Is this doable in
 the next couple of weeks, Peck? I don't think more than a page or two is required.

    Related to the issue of the different proxies use or potential use in high-freq
 reconstructions, I'll work on trying to bring that out in the Introduction. I'll
 bring out the issues of the maturity of the different proxy disciplines.

    Sections 3 and 4 just seem to need some minor wording changes and
 some clarification - possibly in a revised introduction. We're hoping that Tim
 here will be able to do that.  Note that although the reviewer suggested dropping
 the forcing section, John Matthews would like that kept.

    In conclusion, we are nearly there. CRU will be able to find the colour costs
 envisaged.

  To those in Trieste - enjoy the week and I hope it will as fruitful as Wengen was.

  If anyone is going to be out of contact during the second half of June and early July
 can you let me know.

  I've reattached the submission as a word file.

 Cheers
 Phil

    



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