cc: Martin Manning <mmanning@al.noaa.gov>, Kristen Averyt <averyt@ucar.edu>, Susan Solomon <ssolomon@al.noaa.gov>
date: Sat, 14 Apr 2007 13:20:03 -0600
from: Melinda Marquis <marquis@ucar.edu>
subject: Revised Ch. 3 layout proofs
to: Kevin Trenberth <trenbert@ucar.edu>, Phil Jones <p.jones@uea.ac.uk>

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Dear Kevin and Phil,

We have revised the Ch. 3 layout proof in light of the concerns you sent 
us April 4. There were a few issues you noted that we did not change, as 
doing so would have contradicted the style applied across the entire 
report, e.g., Sun (in Box 3.5, pg. 72) is capitalized, though you wish 
it weren't. And the lower-case "a" in "arctic" and "antarctic" when used 
as adjectives has to remain, as this rule is applied throughout the 
report. However, we have tried to accommodate your other concerns. If 
you would like to take a final review, you may do so.

We have placed the revised Ch. 3 file, along with the supplementary 
material, on the Authors Resource Page 
(http://ipcc-wg1.ucar.edu/restricted/wg1/AR4/), where the previous 
versions were. Again, the user name is AR4WG1 and the password is 
Sky7Blue. Please follow the link to the Layout web page in the Whats 
New section.

If you would please contact us Monday, April 16, or at the latest, 
Tuesday, April 17, to let us know if we missed anything, we would be 
grateful.

Thank you for your thorough proofreading of your chapter.

Best,
Melinda

-- 
Dr Melinda Marquis, Deputy Director, IPCC WG I Support Unit
NOAA/ESRL				Phone: +1 303 497 4487
325 Broadway, DSRC R/CSD08	Fax:   +1 303 497 5628
Boulder, CO 80305, USA


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