date: Fri, 09 Mar 2007 00:07:46 -0500
from: Francis Zwiers <francis.zwiers@ec.gc.ca>
subject: Re: [Wg1-ar4-clas] draft to sign
to: wg1-ar4-clas@joss.ucar.edu

   Hi all - here are a few more edits.  I agree with Gabi that we shouldn't include the
   "puppet" sentence.  Also, I don't think we need to compare what Susan said in Paris (as
   quoted by Wasdell) with something that Sir John might hypothetically have said.  I think
   that sends a message about Susan that we don't mean to send! I've tried to add a sentence
   indicating that the Paris process improved the way the document communicates our findings,
   but that it did not change the finding themselves.
   Cheers, Francis
   [1]hegerl@duke.edu wrote:

     Hi all, an attempt to some more edits removing the "puppet" sentence and
     another sentence that I worried about - now on to the chapter edits checking
     (although this is more fun - maybe - anything is more fun than page proofs
     apart maybe from doing the taxes).
     I admit I am frustrated by what at least one of our collegues said to the new
     scientist. He should know better!
     Gabi
     Quoting Ken Denman [2]<ken.denman@ec.gc.ca>:

     Hi Piers et al,
     I have taken the liberty to suggest a few changes (with change tracker turned on) -
     while you Europeans (oops, and Brits) at least are sleeping.  And Piers and Richard,
     thanks a lot for getting this moving quickly.
     Regards, Ken
     ps. Piers - my salary is paid by Fisheries and Oceans Canada. They are VERY uneasy when
     I speak or write letters to the press, but they get really upset when I don't credit
     them appropriately. C'est la vie.
     [3]piers@env.leeds.ac.uk wrote:

     Hi all
     This is the latest draft with Jerry's and Ken's edits. However, in addition I've
     deleted the para on the Paris meeting - as it was essentially repeated within
     the last paragraph, and slightly reordered the other paragraphs
      Again please make further
     edits. Also please could people approve the attachment of their name to such a
     letter. Non highlighted names are people who appear to have already given
     approval for their name to be used. If you are a yellow highlighted name I think
     you are likely (or very likely) to sign!
     If we could have a relaxed attitude and sign a letter that is still in the
     process of being drafted it would save someone (me) a bunch of work at the end
     collecting approvals
     Cheers
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