cc: alex.haxeltine@uea.ac.uk, "'Mike Hulme'" <m.hulme@uea.ac.uk>, "'Vanessa McGregor'" <V.McGregor@uea.ac.uk>
date: Mon, 5 Jul 2004 17:35:41 +0200
from: bo.kjellen@environment.ministry.se
subject: Ang: final TORs and invitation letter
to: "Emily" <e.boyd@uea.ac.uk>

   Dear Emily, and all,
   Thanks for a good paper reflecting a very constructive discussion last Thursday. I have
   just a few comments on the different documents:
   General background:
   Topic 1, next by last sentence of "Information to be provided"- I think it would be better
   to write "What are the impacts on European competitiveness and international trade?"
   I have no view on author for topic 1.b)
   Topic 3, Brief description: I suggest to drop the words "This topic addresses" and just
   start "Global emissions control etc."
   Information to be provided, last line, last word, replace equity with justice - but both
   are fine words, I have no strong feelings!
   Justification for workshop schedule. Do we need "justification", sounds defensive. I
   suggest "Comments on etc". Last sentence should read "This session will take up a large
   part of the final afternoon".
   Invitation:
   Reasons to attend: first para : "fora" is already plural, but often used mistakenly in
   singular instead of "forum". So no e at the end.
   second para: drop "excellent" . Can we guarantee that everybody is excellent, and does it
   only apply to scientists?
   Finally I have noted that I appear both as "Tyndall" and as "Ministry of Environment" in
   different places. If Tyndall accepts I would be happy  to be included in your team, but I
   leave the decision to you.
   Once again thanks, great job
   Cheers
   Bo

   "Emily" <e.boyd@uea.ac.uk>

   2004-07-05 14:40

                                             "'Mike Hulme'" <m.hulme@uea.ac.uk>
                             <alex.haxeltine@uea.ac.uk>
                             Bo Kjelln/ENVIRONMENT/MINISTRY@RK
                                     Kopia:        "'Vanessa McGregor'" <V.McGregor@uea.ac.uk>
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                                     rende:        final TORs and invitation letter

   En bilaga med namnet EFIEA WS2 TORS FINAL DRAFT5.7.04.DOC har tagits bort.
   En bilaga med namnet EFIEA_WORKSHOP2_INVITATION_DRAFT2.6_EB.DOC har tagits bort.
   Dear Mike, Alex and Bo

   Please I would be grateful if you could have a glance at the final TORs and the invitation
   letter and let me know if you have any comments/queries by this afternoon, thank you.

   Just a note: I have added a couple of scientists to the list of invitees previously omitted
   from WS2 list, including Saleem Hucq (IIED) and Mans Nilsson (SEI) (both attending WS1). I
   though that they are good bridging people, Saleem for adaptation (to give that topic some
   more weighting) and Mans as an author for WS1 - so will have been involved already in the
   concepts, he is good at conceptual thinking and contributes a lot. However, if you think
   otherwise please just cut them from the list. With them included the list is at 45
   stakeholders.

   We also need to make a final decision on who is to author paper 1b. Marcel is still keen on
   Carraro, what do we think about that?

   Cheers
   Emily
